The Stirring. A Poem  

yesmamallthetime 51F  
1286 posts
6/14/2018 10:05 am
The Stirring. A Poem


You write of love
How what we have
Could grow into it.
Do you know
What effect
Those words have
What feelings
Within me
Those words elicit?

It's like a group
Of captured butterflies
Suddenly became free.
Such fluttering
Of many wings
Are created
With their stirring.

It's pleasant!
Its uplifting!
It's glorious!
It's magnificent!
Adjectives fight
For relevance.
They all want
To take part in it.

While all this
Is happening
I feel a wetness
Creeping from
Under my eyelids.
Should I wipe
Away the evidence
Of how I am affected?

You are not here
To witness
The absorption
Of your words
Oh how they stir!
Oh how they stir!

If you had any idea
If indeed you wrote the truth
Those written words
Have hit their target
Making me wish
Hope and pray
That reality does not
Betray them.

Stimulate my mind with words of poetry. And my body will follow it's lead...


yesmamallthetime 51F  
8790 posts
6/14/2018 10:07 am

I rather like this poem.

Stimulate my mind with words of poetry. And my body will follow it's lead...


Tmptrzz 55F  
44850 posts
6/14/2018 11:45 am

Beautiful as always hun you certainly have a way with words. Have a great day..

Just your average every day run of the mill nana here!!!


yesmamallthetime 51F  
8790 posts
6/14/2018 1:35 pm

    Quoting Tmptrzz:
    Beautiful as always hun you certainly have a way with words. Have a great day..
Thank you so much for reading and commenting Tmptrzz. I am glad you like it.

Stimulate my mind with words of poetry. And my body will follow it's lead...


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